Critical Analysis and Depth of Relevant Literature and Identification of Core Concepts Concepts are clearly identified, but I think they require greater depth of enquiry and discussion.
There are a few things I thinkwould benefit from furtherthought once your proposal issubmitted.I think you need to take a stepback from this and rejig thestructure a little to present yourwork in the best possible light.Currently you have a lot of brokenup small points that make thereview look much moresuperficial than it actually is. Ithink … Read more